No words can repeat. I need help!!?

It needs to say sat after Elixa and will instead of sit (grammar problem). There are two and one in between "Eliza and Will" and the other in "between oh and we". And instead of using numerous nicknames try using he, she, her, him ,the girl, the boy and so on it will make it less confusing other than that I didn't find any good job!!!!! =)